This image is really striking with its soft but effective coloring and the wonderful composition you've come up with. The fabric folds and the design of her outfit are also superbly done.
The only points of improvement you might make are with her hands, which seem a little flat, especially her right one. I think if you flesh the hands out a bit, it'd really bump this up to the next level.
In addition, the dunes are a little wonky; most people probably wouldn't notice, but since I do geology, it did kinda stick out that the dunes in the foreground seem to have been driven by winds entering from the left side of the picture, and the ones in the background were seemingly made by winds blowing in at the opposite direction. It's not to say that that sort of wind change doesn't occur, but it doesn't form big series of dunes in that fashion.
Keep up the good work, this is a fantastic image with an even more fantastic story behind it, I can tell!
Oh, it's such a nice picture, well done! It looks a bit like Zaya Ayame . As I translated her adventures, ever time I see her or a person looking similar to her, I am overjoyed !
The pleasure with the watch is mine, you draw very pretty pictures. Good job you do ! No problem, have a look at www.thief2x.com if you want . Every new person "catching the virus" is appreciated XD!
Tiens encore des dunes! c'est la mode en ce moment, y a eu toi, Linelana Sinon très jolie composition! J'aime beaucoup ta disposition avec le dessin qui commence à partir de la chasseuse. Et j'aime trop le palais dans le fond!
Muahaha oui j'ai vu ça aussi ! Mais bon je me suis un peu craquée sur mes dunes, comme il l'est dit dans la Critique, elles ne sont pas toutes orientées de la même façon ce qui n'est pas très logique =') Mais bon à part ça, ça a l'air d'aller ! Merci beaucoup !
The only points of improvement you might make are with her hands, which seem a little flat, especially her right one. I think if you flesh the hands out a bit, it'd really bump this up to the next level.
In addition, the dunes are a little wonky; most people probably wouldn't notice, but since I do geology, it did kinda stick out that the dunes in the foreground seem to have been driven by winds entering from the left side of the picture, and the ones in the background were seemingly made by winds blowing in at the opposite direction. It's not to say that that sort of wind change doesn't occur, but it doesn't form big series of dunes in that fashion.
Keep up the good work, this is a fantastic image with an even more fantastic story behind it, I can tell!
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